Tuesday, May 30, 2006

With_You

If you go
take all I own,
send me back where I came,
deny my sleep
stop my mind
take out my eyes,
take away my ears,
stop my worthless lungs
end my time.

14 comments:

mizfit said...

whoa! where did this come from woman? it's nice though i rather take away all when i leave ;)

Wild Reeds said...

Hmmm...

L>T said...

very melancholy. i like it, fits my mood.

Srijith Unni said...

Rather, a bit too harsh on yourselves.. :-)

Have Fun, Take Care and God Bless!

Regards,
Srijith.

GrasshopperBoy said...

very moving...i hope all is well passerby

passerby55 said...

Hi Mizfit,

these words are very old, they were somewhere embedded (i don;t even remember the location...haha)

this picture of two flowers on one branch...gave way to them.

it happens nah, you never write a few, and then someday suddenly they come back...

you enjoy and keep smiling always!!

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Hi WIld Reeds..

hmmmm....smile!

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Hi L>T

i can understand that, you a woman of strength.

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hi Srijith,

thanks...

that post i read yesterday on your blog....remarkable one!


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HI GHB,

U one of my superheroes....thanks for your concern.

Good to see your blog alive again!!


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chocoboy107 said...

I know Love exists,but never seen or thought of this kind of love,
but in these I can smell the fragnance of lov,which is full of sacrifices.

Very Beautiful !!!

Hav Question for all,

Is Love only to sacrifice ??

passerby55 said...

hello chocoboy,

"smell the fragnance of lov"
you put it indeed beautifully...

TRUE love is selflessness.....

thankyou for your comment.

starry nights said...

Nice poem.just stopped to say hello

passerby55 said...

Hi Starrynights

thankyou and you are always welcome.

Usha said...

The pain comes through so beautifully and completely. Love this.

passerby55 said...

Welcome Usha,

I am happy to read your comment. Thanks for visiting my Blog.

thankyou ...

Prash said...

nice one

passerby55 said...

thankyou Prash